Reaction to Max Schulman's "LOve is a Fallacy"

The story a "Love is a fallacy" was nice.It was very funny that the girl was already as clever as the guy in the end.Well,that story implied that patience is truly a virtue.Why?Because if Mr. Intelligent didn't have patience in teaching Polly(his love),she wouldn't have been knowledgeable about fallacies and she could have remained her stupidity.It was very unfair in Mr.Intelligent's side because he still didn't get what he wanted.I find Mr. Intelligent very confident about himself and always underestimated his friend Petey which I can't blame him.Petey is such a certified idiot,as in!!But even with his stupidity,he still won in the end because he was the one who got Polly and not Mr.Intelligent.Wonder why??Because,Mr.Intelligent doesn't have a racoon coat
Imagine,just because of this racoon coat,Petey exchanged his love for Polly!!It was also very funny that Polly chose Petey,who was very dumb than Mr.Intelligent who is,obviously, intelligent.In the story, the fallacies were defined and explained well.The story was well-structured.I also felt very sorry for Mr.Intelligent because he did not get Polly.He really tried hard to make Polly a model partner in life but maybe they were really not meant to be but nevertheless,it was not his lost.It was shown in the story too, that however dumb you are,you will not stay as an idiot forever if you just try to put something in your head.
You can really identify or define the characters in the way they are shown in the story.Mr.Intelligent started by making his friend,Petey,choose between Polly or his racoon coat.He was confident that Petey will choose the racoon coat because of his being stupid.In the end,Mr.Intelligent realizes that he made a mistake.But well,his mistake has done good to others.Just like what happened to his friend,Petey,he already has a racoon coat,he also has the girl he likes.And Polly too,because of Mr.Intelligent's teaching,she became intelligent and cleverer than him.
One lesson for Mr.Intelligent is that he must not take advantage of the people who he knew are defenseless(just like Petey)and that he must not be that confident about himself just because he is intelligent.Polly should also be thankful to Mr.Intelligent and Petey should also keep his deal with Mr.Intelligent.
The ending of the story was nice.It had a hanging ending.I liked the author's style of ending the story.It was not like the ending of other stories.Though Polly was already intelligent,she remained like a stupid person becuse she just uses her knowledge literally without thinking.And because of this,she missed the right person to be with who was Mr.Intelligent.Well,Polly and Petey were a perfect combination,imagine,idiot plus stupid,what could the result be??